Project 3
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Title: Writing Project 3
Author: Daniel Doherty
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How does solar energy work?
How does solar energy work?
How does sunlight shining on a solar panel generate electricity? You may have seen solar panels along the highway and thought you understood how they work. Simply, you may state that when the shun shines on the panel, electricity is generated.The Conservation of Energy
The theory of the Conservation of Mass states that energy cannot be created or destroyed, only transformed. Therefore, in the case of solar panels, the electricity (energy) generated by the panels is not magically created from nothing when the sun shines. The electricity generated is thus a transformation of the only other energy source available, light. An easier way to think of this concept is to imagine baking a cake.
So how do solar panels facilitate this energy transformation?
A solar panel is made up of many individual photovoltaic cells.
So how do photovoltaic cells work?
Sunlight is made up of photons, atomic sized particles that radiate from the sun. When sunlight shines on the solar panels, the individual photons strike the silicon and transfer their energy to the electrons of the silicon, knocking them loose from the silicon atoms. A photon can be thought of as the white (cue) ball in the game of pool, and the electrons as the remaining stripes and solids. Just after racking the balls (electrons), they are "stuck" in that position and will not move unless a force acts upon them.
What is an electric field?
An electric field is achieved by creating an imbalance within the photovoltaic cell. This is done by taking two slightly different types of silicon and placing them near each other. The electrons on the two types of silicon are arranged differently, giving one side a slightly positive charge, and the other a slightly negative charge. The two work together to create a path for the loose electrons to move along, forming an orderly electric current. As electrons are negatively charged, they will be pushed away from the negative side and towards the positive side. Just as water will always flow downhill due to the effects of gravity, an electron will always move away from negatively charged objects and towards a positive charge. This scientific principle will always hold true, unlike the laws of nature when depicted in cartoons.
How much energy can be generated by solar panels?
Solar panels have a notoriously low energy efficiency. Solar panels have an average efficiency of about 22%, meaning that only 22% of the electrons knocked loosed by the photons are captured in the form of an electrical current. The remaining energy is usually lost in the form of heat. The effectiveness of a solar panel is thus determined by how well the electric field created by the semiconductor can direct the electrical current to the node which transfers the electricity out of the photovoltaic cells. Going back to our pool example: A good pool player may hit a few of the balls from the break into the pockets, but most will remain on the table. The balls (electrons) that fall into the pockets represent the 22% efficiency of the panels, as a majority of the balls still remain on the table. New technology is attempting to improve the efficiency of solar panels by changing the surface of the silicon semiconductor. Thus more of the electrons would be captured by the electric field and transferred out of the cell as electricity. The improved technology would be in effect, cutting channels in the pool table that guide the balls to the pockets, increasing the likelihood they would go in.What have we learned?
Solar energy is quite easy to understand once these basic concepts have been explained. Sunlight, which is made up of photons, strike the photovoltaic cells contained within the solar panels and knock electrons loose from the silicon semiconductor. These electrons are then directed by the electric field created by the PV cell into an electric current that can be transferred out of the cell and onto the power grid. The efficiency of the panels at directing these loose electrons into a current have a direct impact at the cost of energy generation and improving the efficiency of the panels remains the most important research in the solar technology field.[i.n.]Florida Solar Energy Center Solar Energy Basics http://www.fsec.ucf.edu/en/consumer/solar_electricity/basics/index.htm Web. 20 August 2016
National Aeronautics and Space Administration http://science.nasa.gov/science-news/science-at-nasa/2002/solarcells/ Web. 18 August 2016
The Physics Classroom Electric Field and the Movement of Charge http://www.physicsclassroom.com/class/circuits/Lesson-1/Electric-Field-and-the-Movement-of-Charge Web. 21 August 2016
NW Wind and Solar How do solar systems generate electricity? http://www.nwwindandsolar.com/solar-power-in-seattle-and-the-northwest/how-do-solar-systems-produce-energy/
Peer review
Dan wrote a Science Blog composition based on the question: "How do solar panels generate electricity?". He starts with an outline on the history and technical aspects of solar panels which is followed up by the actual answer.
The rhetorical situation here is clear, a question is being answered. I would imagine an audience of scientifically literate, curious people. This genre is appropriate for this situation, as answering a question or explaining some scientific principle is the reason for this genre's existence. As this genre is meant to make complex scientific problems more understandable, Dan's word choice and sentence structure are more or less sound. There are some syntactical problems such as the last sentence in the answer just ending. An aspect of the genre that Dan does not take up is the visual aid. An example of where a visual aid could come in handy could be to better illustrate the photoelectric effect. There is an analogy but there is potential for more. As I discussed previously (the last three sentences), using the rhetorical devices of visual aids and analogies would assist in making this piece more successful. As I will discuss later on, conforming more towards the schema would also help the piece by making it more digestible.
The schema outlined by group 1 is not particularly well conformed to in this composition. For instance, the first element in the answer, a "specific_topic" element, raises a schema error. As far as I can tell this is because a "specific_topic" element must be preceded by a "technical_principle" element. Also a problem with this composition is the code left over from the template file. All of this code should be removed and replaced with one's own. Lastly, the "sources" element/section of the blog was left entirely untouched.
In terms of rhetorical situation and response, Dan's piece reflects research done by group one quite well. However in terms of schema conformity, it could use some work. My main piece of advice is to get rid of all the boilerplate XML that comes with the template. Simply doing this will, in my opinion, enhance readability. A corollary to this advice is to clean up schema errors. Finally, adding such devices as visual aids and analogies would help in conforming to the genre.
Instructor Note
Nice work here--there are a few moments where I had questions (see comments above), but on the whole I think you pulled off the genre very well and with an appropriate topic and audience in mind.